Welcome to the 1001 Nights Tale wiki writing page.


The elbow method of Peer Constructive Advice below
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Elbowing Procedures

These question stems, as designed by Peter Elbow, elicit quality, usable, positive feedback for writers. The key is to follow the question stems exactly. Frame your feedback in the following ways:

"I heard…" This is where you summarize the information and details that you heard. Your goal is to give the writer a sense of what's coming across in the writing.

"I liked…" Point out words, themes, ideas, moments that work well.

"I wondered…" This is where you are looking for something more, or something is unclear. You can also use:
"I had a question about…"
"I was looking for an example of…"
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Check out the Mr. Santos' class wikis


Meyer Island students have revised drafts in bold if they have substantially been edited, otherwise you'll need to add more details, dialog, and descriptive language.


A and W's writing (revised draft)

A oK's writing (revised draft)

basketball4life's writing[revised]

Eragon's writing (revised)

hgymnast's writing(revised recently)

HorsePerson's writing(revised recently)

live4boys' writing

live4friends' writing

live4horses' writing

maddog56's writing

milk shake's writing {revised}
Milk Shake blog account

molovesdogs' writing[revised]

pistons123's writing(revised)

Poke-A-Doke's writing[revised] <a href="http://www..classblogmeister.com/blog.php?blogger_id=68840.com/music/brahms.html">Brahms</a>my class blog meister stuff

rootbeer's writing(revised)

sgymnast's writing

slycooper's writing

snow cone's writing

summer's writing(revised recently)

texboy's writing{final draft}

Weird Al's Writing{final draft}


wolfpack's writing (revised Draft)




A and W's opinion my top 3 best revised are:

1.) hgymnast's writing
2.) A and W's writing
3.) Eragon's writing
A and W's opinion should be posted on his blog - his mom says LISTEN and FOCUS!
yes, she is sitting right next to me right now!
click here to read more writing from other classes.

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click here to go to the student's classblogmeister accounts: <a href="http://www.classblogmeister.com/">classblogmeister accounts</a>names to type in(all under the name Dean Meyer):

click here to go to the students page to see there blog's!!


A and W
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A oK
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basketball4life
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Eragon
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hgymnast
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HorsePerson
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live4boys
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live4friends
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live4horses
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maddog56
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milk shake
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molovesdogs
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patelreading
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pistons123
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Poke-A-Doke
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rootbeer
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sgymnast
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slycooper
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snow cone
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summer
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tex
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weird al
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wolfpack
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