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www.meyerisland.inspiringteachers.com fable moral : try your best always! idom: bite the bullet beat the band to get what you want you have to fight for it. Jordan is a small man who cant figure out were he should be in life.So he sees that no matter how small or diffrent he is that he is who he is .People can be all fancy and rich but they are who they are.He plays for Wisconsin.He plays for pistons.He gets life. GO PISTONS!!!!!!!!!! FABLE Once upon a time there was a small boy that was like a normal person but he was mini. This boys name was Jordan .He loved the sport basketball but he had a smudge of trouble getting the ball in for long shots. Although he was not the king of sports he loved all sports but mostly he liked basketball. He did make all the teams but a lot of people didn't pass the darn ball to the little boy. But he wasn't just a Little boy as in 4'11 he was 4ft. He was LITTLE. He was in 5 Th grade and had a lot of friends & he had a girlfriend. He also played football but the coach NEVER I mean NEVER gave him the ball. He liked the pistons and always liked to be with friends. He had a normal life with family and stuff.But his biggest love was in the game. Then in his years of high school he played on the freshman team. He was great; the best. Good enough to go play at a college! Within the next week he got a phone call saying that someone from Wisconsin was coming to see him play. On Friday a guy that looked familiar stopped Jordan. He thought, it cant be Wisconsin sent the coach of the team he dreamed to be on. So he stayed and watched him play. After the game he told him that if he wanted he could play for wonderful Wisconsin ! Well of course Jordan said OK and ran out the door. When he got to campus the coach said that he will now will be his first year of college.Then Jordan's first game was today at four. They won. Jordan and Wisconsin did not lose.They were number one as was Jordan's jersey number. At Jordan's last game they were number one and they won as normal. It was his last year at Wisconsin. They were number two this year and it was the last game & they were playing Ohio State, number one. It was the forth period and there was 10 seconds to go. Ohio made a shot and and that gave them a two point lead. They passed the ball into Jordan who got it with 3 seconds to go. The half court shot........ SWISH. They win - YES!!!!!!!!!!! And they win it all ........ GO RED ..........GO WHITE! As Jordan's life went on he had great reputation and tons of friend's.After his years at Wisconsin University he lived in a nice condo on the outskirts of town.One day when he awoke the phone rang he grabbed the phone "WHAT" he said "hello this is Bill Davidson from the pistons. I would like to have a meeting with you. When said Jordan. "12:30 today at the red lobster. Do we have a deal Yes sure see you at 12:30.Jordan sat there and thought what would he want with me." Well Jordan went out and got a suit and ready.So then he chugged away in his old jalopy. When he got there right by the door stood Mr.Davidson with his fancy cell phone talking to some guy named John.In a nervous voice Jordan said hello sir hello said Mr.Davidson as they shook hands and walked inside to their table.As they waited for their food Mr.Davidson asked if he would like to come play for the pistons. Jordan spit out his water "WHAT". Everyone stared at them for a minute. Then Jordan said oh yes please please OK then your 4 year contract will be for 11 million big hoolies (bucks).They shook again and went home.So Jordan went to his first game and they won then they won won again and again and again till it was their last game of his life. They were playing the Miami Heat and Jordan did one of his miracles for the Superior WIN!!!!!!!And then he grbbed the mike and said //**YOU ALL ARE WHO YOU ARE YOU CAN DRESS ALL FANCY AND COOL BUT YOU ARE WHO YOU ARE.**//
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 * || FABLE: Once upon a time there was a small boy that was like a normal person but he was short. This boys name was Jordan .He loved the sport basketball but he had a smudge of trouble getting the ball in for long shots. Although he was not the king of sports he loved all sports but mostly he liked basketball. He did make all the teams but a lot of people didn't pass the darn ball to the little boy. But he wasn't just a Little boy as in 4'11 he was 4ft. He was LITTLE. He was in 5 th grade and had a lot of friends & he had a girlfriend. He also played football but the coach NEVER I mean NEVER gave him the ball. He liked the pistons and always liked to be with friends. He had a normal life with family and stuff.But his biggest love was in the game. Then in his years of high school he played on the freshman team. He was great; the best. Good enough to go play at a college! Within the next week he got a phone call saying that someone from Wisconsin was coming to see him play. On Friday a guy that looked familiar stopped Jordan. He thought, it cant be Wisconsin sent the coach of the team he dreamed to be on. So stayed and watched him play. After the game he told him that if he wanted he could play for Wisconsin! Well of course Jordan said ok and ran out the door. When he got to campus the coach said that he will now be his first year of college.Then Jordan's first game was today at four. They won. Jordan was outstanding Wisconsin did not lose.They were number one as was Jordan's jersey number. At Jordan's last game they were number one and they won as normal. It was his last year at Wisconsin. They were number two this year and it was the last game & they were playing Ohio State, number one. It was the forth period and there was 10 seconds to go. Ohio made a shot and that gave them a two point lead. They passed the ball into Jordan who got it with 3 seconds to go. The half court shot........ SWISH. They win YES!!!!!!!!!!! And they win it all ........ GO RED..........GO WHITE! FINAL ||

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++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ I heard in your story that a little boy played basketball and he went to college at Michigan State. He was very very little. I like that that the little boy thinks he can play basketball because some kids say little people can't play basketball. He made the winning basket. What happens with the boy after the big game? Do you want to go to Michigan State? from Austin F ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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I really liked your addition of the Mr. Big Shot picture - try to add citation showing where you got the pic & who owns it, they'd appreciate the prop, not to mention I want to see it. Nachos! - the chief

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\ vName: Lucas Hoffman date: May, 30, 2007

Book: Dragon Lance vol.1 dragons of Autumn Twilight book one

Pages: 263

Copyright: 2000

Author: Margaret Weis and Tracy Hickman

Summary:

Have you ever lived in a town with ALL of your friends! Have you ever loved where you live I mean absolutely loved it .Has there ever been nothing wrong with where you live .Well that is how it was for Sturm Taris Carramon. They all lived in the town of new port. New port was the most peace full place in the whole world. There was no mean people everybody was so nice and caring for each other. Everybody was included in town games and it was the perfect place. Until Goldmoon was disturbed. (Goldmoon was a power sores that kept Newport so peaceful and calm) There was somebody who wanted to make New Port and all places EVIL!!! But who could it be to doing this. That is what was thought when all the little boys and girls and mothers and fathers saw the sky turned gray. But then oh my god said Carramon as the “bad guys” came down the mountain.

Carramon got Sturm and Tanis and they ran as fast as they could to get away safely. When they made it to the top of the mountain they looked back and saw there homey burst into fames. They must head off to find this sourse. Will they make it? You must read to find out.

Explain why you would recommend or not recommend this book: I would recommend this to any one who LOVES fanicy and vilence.

What was your favorite part: my favorite part was when Tanis reached for the staff!

What did you do for your project: I made a puzzle

Would you re read this book: no there would be no suprises

What will you remember about this book : I really like to read about dragons and fake stuff!

I think I should get b+ at least I put a lot of effort in to it

I think I should get a b+ I put effort in to it!