slycooper's+writing

when their were 4 children named Peter,Josh,Lucy,and Abby. who were 6th grade who were children who respect their teacher`s,cleaned their room, and bearly were talker every day but one day peter missed a worksheet of math and missed lunch and it was his favorite,nachos then peter found a wardrobe in Mr Meyers room that took him to Mr.Meyer`s home with his stuff like Ipods,coats,sports t-shirts,computers,etc.Peter was amused with his home. ring ring the next class was ready to learn s.s (social studies) about slavery, 2 hour later,It was 10 min until school was out for the day. The kid were rushing to get no homework tonight but Lucy got 1 chapter of The Lion The witch and The Wardrobe chapter 14 when the children got home Josh and Abby were playing DDR SN (Dance Dance Revilution super NOVA). Lucy was getting her homework done and peter was hunger from lunch so he ate a ton of food.When the 4 kids done doing something they relaxed for the rest of day. THE END

=COMMENT?= +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Hello Sly cooper, (1) I heard that one of the childeren found a wordrod that lead him/her to their teachers house. Can you say the name of the student its not going to hurt anything ya know. (2) What is it Peter in her house cause I heard that he is in a house when he is suposed to be at school? is it why didn't you say it in the first place? (3) I think that your story is Fiction and Cool! Hello SylCooper, I heard there were 4 kids called peter,,josh,lucy and abby they were in 6th grade and they were perfect students.and then they got homwork on the vacation and they did it and then they relaxed. I liked that peter, josh,lucy, and abby relaxed after homework. I wonderd about how did josh,lucy,peter, and abby got to be grat students.