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click here to go to my classblogmeister account: my classblogmeister account Once upon a time there were a basset hound called Rocky. His owner named John whistled for Rocky to come and get ready for hunting.Rocky didn't came. Instead his owner came to him. Rocky woke up. His owner was all ready to go hunting so there they went. John followed Rocky all around but, then he ran straight to BARKING. His owner sighed" He's just lost his hearing." They drove back home. Rocky was really mad because he just couldn't hear. So Rocky went to go visit his friends on the farm were he lived. Rocky's friends were a horse named Hannah, a beagle named Ace, and a cat named Hayley. Rocky said " You guys, I have a problem I can't hear very well because of these short ears." Looks like we have a mystery to solve!" remarked Hannah."Can you guys please help me at all?," asked rocky. Nay!" Said Hannah." Come on, please!" questioned Rocky. "I'm in, Me too, Nay means Yay!!! All the animals replied." Great!!!!" Rocky Barked. " So how are you going to help me?" asked rocky." I got it" Said Ace. So he told them the plan. They went right to it. Ace made sound behind a bush. Rocky had to point to were the sound was coming from. That helped but, didn't cure. So they thought they'd call it a day. The next day he went hunting again. Right when Rocky wondered around and got a smell. He barked again, but Rocky got trapped in a avalanche. Rocks tumbled down all around Rocky. A bolder fell on his short stubby ears. Rocky pulled as hard as he could. All his ears did was stretch. Rocky knew he had to get out of the avalanche for John and his friends. So he pulled himself free. He knew his ears hurt so bad that he got to his owner who met him at the end of the avalanche. The owner picked Rocky up and rushed to the hospital. They got him cured. They didn't know what kind of dog he was until the owner explained how Rocky's ears got stuck in the avalanche and how his ears got all stretched out by being in the avalanche. It took a little while for Rocky to get home, but Rocky got home safe and sound. His owner got interviewed on the paper and on the news. Rocky thanked his friends. " We didn't do anything though". replied Hayley. "Yes you did, you made me fight to live for you. That's what you did!" Yelled Rocky. Now Rocky can have privacy and can hear very well now. The moral is That you should trust your good friends, even though they might think the did something wrong they might of helped you a lot. That's how the basset hound got it's long ears Once upon a time there were a basset hound called Rocky. His owner named John whistled for Rocky to come and get ready for hunting.Rocky didn't came. Instead his owner came to him.Rocky woke up. His owner was all ready to go hunting so there they went. John followed Rocky all around but, then he ran straight to BARKING. His owner sighed" He's just lost his hearing." They drove back home. Rocky was really mad because he just couldn't hear. So Rocky went to go visit his friends on the farm were he lived. Rocky's friends were a horse named Hannah, a beagle named Ace, and a cat named Hayley. Rocky said " You guys, I have a problem I can't hear very well because of these short ears." Looks like we have a mystery to solve!" remarked Hannah."Can you guys please help me at all?," asked rocky. Nay!" Said Hannah." Come on, please!" questioned Rocky. "I'm in, Me too, Nay means Yay!!! All the animals replied." Great!!!!" Rocky Barked. " So how are you going to help me?" asked rocky." I got it" Said Ace. So he told them the plan. They went right to it. Ace made sound behind a bush. Rocky had to point to were the sound was coming from. That helped but, didn't cure. So they thought they'd call it a day. The next day he went hunting again. Right when Rocky wondered around and got a smell. He barked again, but Rocky got trapped in a avalanche. Rocks tumbled down all around Rocky. A bolder fell on his short stubby ears. Rocky pulled as hard as he could. All his ears did was stretch. Rocky knew he had to get out of the avalanche for John and his friends. So he pulled himself free. He knew his ears hurt so bad that he got to his owner who met him at the end of the avalanche. The owner picked Rocky up and rushed to the hospital. They got him cured. They didn't know what kind of dog he was until the owner explained how Rocky's ears got stuck in the avalanche and how his ears got all stretched out by being in the avalanche. It took a little while for Rocky to get home, but Rocky got home safe and sound. His owner got interviewed on the paper and on the news. Rocky thanked his friends. " We didn't do anything though". replied Hayley. "Yes you did, you made me fight to live for you. That's what you did!" Yelled Rocky. Now Rocky can have privacy and can hear very well now. The moral is That you should trust your good friends, even though they might think the did something wrong they might of helped you a lot. That's how the basset hound got it's long ears
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The people that I think that improved their writing the most are Dylan W, Gabby, and Bianca. The most from my class are HorsePerson, Hgymnast, and ..... A & W.

Hi Miranda. I heard that the dog got caught in an avalanche, and his ears stretched and stretched until they were long and he could hear again. What was the owners name? What did the owner explain about what happened? I like how you said "Barking" in all caps, and how you said "Nay means yay" because it was funny. From Dylan W.

Hi MoLovesDogs Your story is really good I don't know what to say it is really good. Sorry I tryed to help sorry well good luck in the future! -Hgymnast

meyerislandchief writes: check your spelling (c'mon) and grammar add more adjectives & adverbs (describing words) to really bring the story visually to life for your reader. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Hi Mo loves Dogs! I heard...that the basset's ears got stuck on an "avelanche."Then,he could hear! I liked...that the story is what you predicted that happend I wondered about.....what is an avelanche? -Constanza!!